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The sound of sounds
Contributed by
danimus
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Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 02:30:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The sound of sounds made silently
In the utmost darkness lifts senses to the sky
Each verb clashed liked waves in anticipation from the sea
Increasing temperatures with a wink of an eye
A night of a million candles elope my mind
Blind to all points of referrence but serene
Consciously asleep but completely aware and wild
In a spin of no affectionate measure for dreams
Will you dance on top of water tonight with me?
I will protect you from violent waves that crash over our feet
Leave all the ideals of what we use to be
And take in the magnectic air as we meet
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2004-11-20 14:30:54]
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Re: The sound of sounds
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 02:44:19 PM AEST
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| this is so beautiful. i especially like the final stanza. |
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Re: The sound of sounds
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 12:10:43 AM AEST
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| I like this a lot. Get the spelling errors out of there and I could see it even being published. Your images are those of emotion and very appealing. Cheers! |
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