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Sugar Coated Needles and Pins
Contributed by
deadinside
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Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 12:14:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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last night i feel asleep to the sounds
of an acoustic guitar playing through a cold stereo
nobody here to play for me, nobody to sing me to sleep.
all the thoughts just hovered like a dark cloud,
eventually it rains eventually thoughts turn to tears.
tears can be forgotten , thoughts can be lost but memories last forever
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deadinside
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2004-11-20 12:14:30]
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Re: Sugar Coated Needles and Pins
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by Kitty_cat on
Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 12:17:45 PM AEST
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You wrote this very well...i can feel your loneliness. Things will get better for you, and some day, someone will be there to play for you.
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Re: Sugar Coated Needles and Pins
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by Sinned on
Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 08:12:29 AM AEST
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You will find
Bad memories fade
Good memories stay
If you seek happiness
Get off your ask
That's right your behind
Sad write
Sinned |
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Re: Sugar Coated Needles and Pins
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by jace on
Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 02:17:39 PM AEST
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I am glad it was not as
gorey as the title made it sound
well done |
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