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Death I Embrace Thee
Contributed by
pixie
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Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 10:09:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Death I embrace thee,
At last you have come to me,
You have chosen me above the rest,
I am the one who will pass your test.
I am the one who will take you on,
At the end you’ll be singing my song,
I will dance with you spin you round,
Kick you as you fall to the ground.
I bare all your scars from your games,
I have now made suicide quite tame,
But regardless of you I am still here,
I am not your whore do I make myself clear?!
I hold you close my enemy, my foe,
You will die from my deadly blow,
I am your very worst nightmare,
I want you to know I’ll always be there.
Breathing right down your neck,
You’ll be able to feel my fiery breath,
So death I embrace you, I really do,
My wrath is my present to be unwrapped by you
Copyright ©
pixie
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2004-11-20 10:09:17]
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Re: Death I Embrace Thee
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by lunartune on
Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 10:19:00 AM AEST
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| Marvolous with a fiery passion. Very good. *claps* keep it comming. |
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Re: Death I Embrace Thee
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by PhantomVampyress on
Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 11:10:09 AM AEST
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wow i like this poem of yours alot has a great flow.. and alot of feeling put into this ..great job pixie
peace and hope
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Re: Death I Embrace Thee
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by pander on
Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 11:52:33 AM AEST
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This is a very dark and powerful yet optomistic piece. All about facing the most difficult of challenges head-on and wining them
well done!
Luv,
Pander
xxxx
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Re: Death I Embrace Thee
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by secretwind on
Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 11:56:36 AM AEST
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The never ending battle goes on and on
stand and fight with all your might
and laugh as death pauses
confused by the fight in you.
Well Written.
The Wind..... |
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Re: Death I Embrace Thee
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by Willofree on
Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 12:52:37 PM AEST
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A wonderful write depicting a fireary determination and positive focus. A beautiful flow and rhythum, and powerful words.
Great write
Willofree |
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