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Will You Still Love Me Tomorrow?
Contributed by
pixie
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Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 08:17:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Will you still love me tomorrow?
Will you love me when I’m filled with sorrow?
How about when I am sad & crying,
When my heart is far from flying.
What about when I can’t get out of bed,
When I have thoughts of suicide going through my head,
Or when I just burst into tears for no reason,
Will your love for me ever go out of season?
Can I always count on your arms being there?
Ready to wrap me up, to show you care,
Will you love me after we’ve had a row?
Will you accept apologies when I’ve been a real cow?
I hope that you will love me til the end of our days,
I really want your love to forever stay,
Without you in my life I would fall apart,
I could never recover from my broken heart.
Please say you’ll love me from until the end of time,
Whisper into my ear you will always be mine,
Will you still love me tomorrow?
In your footsteps I always want to follow.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2004-11-20 08:17:25]
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Re: Will You Still Love Me Tomorrow?
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by a_bear on
Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 09:10:59 AM AEST
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I like that..when I've been a cow..lol good line pixilator!
great write..:-*) |
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Re: Will You Still Love Me Tomorrow?
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by PhantomVampyress on
Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 11:11:58 AM AEST
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wow pixie, such a passionate write.. this is a very powerful and emotion filled poem.. I liked the flow and the feeling from it great job
Peace and hope
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Re: Will You Still Love Me Tomorrow?
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by Willofree on
Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 01:06:05 PM AEST
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A beautiful write related to a need and desire for unconditional love and acceptance.... something we can all relate to. I really like your poetic rhythum and style
A powerful write
Willofree
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