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Hold on?
Contributed by
Silentpwn
on
Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 03:44:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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..you.. won't ever.. hear of me again.
..are you *'*** happy? Look what you've..
..made me do.
Cut my life short.. Take my breath. All with this single blade.. Utter nonsense.
I.. talk.. in.. a shouting.. tone..
there's nothing you could ever do..
..to make me not feel alone.
the one I *'*** LOVE.. hates me.
..so, there's no point in holding on...
..to this slipping grip on reality.
..because, without YOU.. I'm nothing.
..without you here.. I'm fading.. and I might as well..
..quit.. before I hurt.. more than.. I do.. now.
These tears show I'm still living..
these fears of change show I'm still breathing.
my heart's beating.. and It's reassuring.
..but, as the time passes.. I still miss you.
..you're still all I can think about.. everyday.
ALL I WANTED IN LIFE.. was to be held..
..and loved.. by .. you.
..and now, you're GONE.. forever.. and there's not a damn thing I can do to change that.
I'm coming, god, so.. please.. take me in, under your wing..
..and show me how to live again.
I hate not.. being with you..
why'd you have to leave?
I don't think I quite got the point of this absense.
..so, I take this.. blade.. and.. this.. wrist..
..and put both together..
..the blood flows thick and the blade is trembling.
..fear strikes.. and you walk through the door.
"It's all a big mistake.."
..I'm gone, like you were..
I'm gone forever, like you were.
I'm dead.. forever..
..and all I can say, is I'm sorry for everything.
..I'm sorry for crying every night, over you.
I'm sorry for caring.. so.. god damn much.
I'm sorry for loving you, with all of my soul..
..so, please, don't let this discourage you..
..from shattering another heart.
..so, now, you can go start.. another life.
without me.. don't hold on.
There's no point.
Copyright ©
Silentpwn
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2004-11-20 03:44:17]
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Re: Hold on?
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 06:17:38 AM AEST
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Awww this is so sad, I can't say much without making myself sound like a hypocrite but is it really worth dying over another person?
Take Care
- Becca |
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Re: Hold on?
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by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 06:57:42 AM AEST
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Such a sad write, hope everything goes well with you.
Hugs,
Jane x |
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Re: Hold on?
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by lunartune on
Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 03:37:46 PM AEST
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Great write. Really sad, but really good. I could totaly see in my minds eye what was going on while I read. Good. Good. Hope you feel better.
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Re: Hold on?
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by AlurTemptation on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 06:08:15 PM AEST
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| Wow, you put how I feel into good words... Do you feel this way? I hope you don't, but if you do, maybe we could talk cause I fell the same way as you do... ~Emily |
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