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What
Contributed by
unlovedchild
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Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 02:16:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Pretty
What I want to be
Sweet
What I wish I was
Friendly
What I know I'm not
Loved
What I really want to be
Especially by my family
I wish I was pretty sweet friendly and loved
But it's something that you are once more above
Many people are all and some may not be
But no one is as bad as me
Copyright ©
unlovedchild
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2004-11-20 02:16:26]
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Re: What
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by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 06:23:07 AM AEST
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Aww this is really a nice write, its short but it gets the message across.
Hugs,
Jane |
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Re: What
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by PhantomVampyress on
Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 11:57:55 AM AEST
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this is a short and powerful write.. maybe you just think that .. we here on ypdc care about you.. your a great person.. and i hope you feel better
peace and hope
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Re: What
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by assassinatorgirl on
Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 09:53:08 PM AEST
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| great poem, but i'm worse than you so bleh =P *sticks tongue out* |
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Re: What
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by Drapes on
Tuesday, 7th March 2006 @ 09:17:22 PM AEST
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Wow, you're so much better than you think you are, just look at your work! I, too, feel this way a lot of the time. Anyone who pus you down isn't worth your time and isn't worth listening to. Best of luck to you!
-Drapes |
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