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Candle Light
Contributed by
secretwind
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Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 02:14:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Illuminated
In the candle light
I see your body shiver,
I kiss your face
then I taste your flow...
In a daze
love to feel this way,
something is coming
something unknown
explodes
and all I can do is moan.
Holding your hand
I feel you start to shake,
a soft O flows
rainbows form
as our love melts
and becomes a river...
our bodies merge
and become one
a perfect moment in time,
a lasting tenderness
sweet bliss
vivid visions
as we ride into the night.
In the window
the candle light
slowly fades,
we lay by the fire
and softly moan...
Copyright ©
secretwind
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2004-11-20 02:14:30]
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Re: Candle Light
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by a_bear on
Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 02:21:33 AM AEST
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| ahhh yes. |
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Re: Candle Light
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by Kie on
Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 07:37:54 AM AEST
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There is something mysterious, alluring and sensual when candles are lit. It shades and lightens various parts of our body. Like a hide and see, peek a blue. The skin seems more smooth, the eyes more radiant. I could go on and on.
I LOVED your poem..
Kie |
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Re: Candle Light
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by pixie on
Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 08:21:57 AM AEST
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simply beautiful write,
pixie xx |
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Re: Candle Light
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by emystar on
Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 04:29:38 PM AEST
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Mercy darlin ya got me moaning now. What can I say, I'm in-luv with your flows.
You can really make a lady's heart drool.
Hot, hot, hot-n- very pasonate.
luv, huggs, longings,
emy
U have me over here day dreaming again.
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Re: Candle Light
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by Deathly_Rose on
Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 12:35:31 PM AEST
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very vivd imagery, very passionate.
This poem paints a picture within the readers mind, a picture of two humans, becoming as one, as the light from the candle casts shadows among the room.
Great write.
keep up the good work
*~Alicia~* |
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