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Time
Contributed by
daydreamer22
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Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 12:11:11 AM in AEST
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Time is passing me by
While I sit here waiting for something more
Something greater that will help me out of this deep depression
Then you came along
You tell me all the things I want to hear
You hold my hand and kiss me
You pulled me out of what seemed my darkest hour
Now I think I am in love with you
I would do anything for you
This feeling has never been so strong before
You are my only
My everything
I wish time would stop
Or at least slow down and wait
But sadly time waits for no one
So we will have to use what we have
But no matter how long this lasts
I will love you forever
I shall hold on to memories of you
Until the day I die...
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2004-11-20 00:11:11]
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Re: Time
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by veruca on
Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 12:20:01 AM AEST
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I love this write but it also brings back sad memories...I used to feel the same way about my ex-bf but then he cheated on me, then broke up with me. I wrote a poem about him, "I miss you" it is acually right under this one......well i will get ova that...but u may hav a chance in life with whoeva u r writing about..good luck
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Re: Time
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by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 06:01:08 AM AEST
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I can relate very well to this write, very nicely done.
Hugs,
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