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Blood From My Head to My Toes
Contributed by
CrimsonTears
on
Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 11:36:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Covered in blood from my head to my toes
Only one spot of skin that still shows
A small little stream where my tears fell
Behind all this, there is a sad story to tell
I sat in my room one cold lonely night
Filled with sadness no happiness in sight
The pain inside was too much to bare
And I could feel my heart beginning to tear
So I took out my trusty metallic blade
I just wanted all the pain to fade
It got a little out of hand
You couldn’t possibly understand
It’s like for that moment I wasn’t there
No other pain could possibly compare
As the tears fell down my bloody face
The blood fell all over the place
The next thing that I knew
I saw all of you
Standing over me with tears in your eyes
Why is it that everyone cries?
I hear you whisper “she can’t be dead”
I yell “no“, but no one heard what I said
I just couldn’t believe that I met my end
All because the little blade became my best friend
So here I am now covered in blood from my head to my toes
Only one little spot of skin still shows
A small little stream where my tears fell
Now you know the sad story I had to tell
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CrimsonTears
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2004-11-19 23:36:23]
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Re: Blood From My Head to My Toes
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by veruca on
Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 12:10:03 AM AEST
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WOW! That is very strong....I love how you have writen this...it is so fantastic! A lot of emotion is comming out of this....
loved it,
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Re: Blood From My Head to My Toes
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 12:11:09 AM AEST
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| fantastic write. ive missed your writes for so long. |
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Re: Blood From My Head to My Toes
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by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 05:47:06 AM AEST
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OMG that was beyong fantastic, wow that was just brilliant.
Hugs,
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Re: Blood From My Head to My Toes
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by Dorkfish on
Monday, 20th June 2005 @ 03:29:19 PM AEST
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| That was very good! You are an excellent writer! |
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