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Inner Shadow Blues
Contributed by
secretwind
on
Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 10:52:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Sometimes
when I flow
I fall...
deep
Into shadows,
I try my best
to resist
thee emotional torture
but I still wanna love
wanna kiss.
In my room
there's four walls
where I go
when I don't know what to do
I release a deep
sigh...
as I hide
and admire the view.
Here In the darkness
true feelings
are easily hidden
momentarily concealed,
I get emotionally erratic
won't answer the door
or the phone
just need sometime alone.
I try my best
to resist
any emotional kiss
ssshh
don't tell nobody
but that's something
I do miss.
Sometimes
when I fall
I slowly fall....
Copyright ©
secretwind
... [
2004-11-19 22:52:25]
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Re: Inner Shadow Blues
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 12:12:44 AM AEST
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| excellent write. very interesting. |
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Re: Inner Shadow Blues
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by pixie on
Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 08:26:57 AM AEST
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sad and beautifully written,
pixie xx |
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Re: Inner Shadow Blues
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by emystar on
Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 04:38:38 PM AEST
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I hear ya friend.
I don't have much knocking on my door but sometimes I jus wonna flush the phone down the commode.
Hang tuff, my sweet, you'll get there.
I live in my own little world.
luv, butches huggs, smiles, hope,
emy |
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