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The price for her tears...
Contributed by
Unheard_Mute
on
Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 09:07:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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I'm tired, so tired of all this bull,
A black eye every week, bruise every day,
Poor girl, she doesn't know she loves a tool,
It wasn't her fault, now he has to pay.
Don't say I'm wrong, I was driven to it,
Couldn't take another tear on my shirt,
He had his chance, and didn't care a bit,
She had her turn, now he's got to get hurt.
Her own man hit her, for nothing at all,
Now I am the one that will purge his sin,
The floor met him at a four-story fall,
I was just trying to protect her skin.
He was a fool, and he needed to die,
His life was the price for making you cry...
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Re: The price for her tears...
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 09:48:59 PM AEST
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| powerful and emotional. harrassment, has anyone ever not gone through it? there are better ways to solve things than violence against yourself and against others though...::doesnt want to get on your bad side and be in a building higher than one story:: |
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Re: The price for her tears...
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 12:31:33 AM AEST
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rad poem. I loved the feel of righteous anger.
I too hate guys that abuse girls the last line
was awesome.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: The price for her tears...
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by waos on
Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 07:54:28 PM AEST
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| that was good. powerful.... |
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Re: The price for her tears...
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by FlintHunter on
Thursday, 1st September 2011 @ 09:37:22 AM AEST
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| A very moving and emotionally painful poem about a subject that is so difficult to write about. You are brave to face it with so much strength. Thank you. |
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