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Suicidal Princess
Contributed by
babygurl33
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Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 08:11:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I’m trapped in a hole,
I’m growing very old.
I’m screaming but no one cares,
Touch me if you dare.
I feel surrounded by bumblebee hives,
I feel like a hundred stabbing knives.
My blood is tasty, mmm so sweet,
I feel like I’m beginning to be beat.
My face is going pale; my eyes are going black,
I feel goose bumps all down my back.
Death is in the air; it runs around trying to scare.
There’s no where to run,
All I have with me is a gun.
Three bullets will do,
One for me and two for you.
I’m dead and lay beside you,
I just wish we could have said the two “I do’s”.
Because of my hurt,
I now lie in a box six feet under the dirt.
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babygurl33
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Re: Suicidal Princess
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 08:52:35 PM AEST
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| related to this poem in my own little way, sadly =/ great poem. very interesting and captivating. anger and depression burn a hole through a person just like a bullet does sometimes... |
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Re: Suicidal Princess
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by daydreamer22 on
Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 08:57:06 PM AEST
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this poem reallly got to me...it describes how much pain one person can really hold deep inside them...excellent work...bravo...
Awaiting your next...
~*ME*~ |
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Re: Suicidal Princess
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by pixie on
Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 08:31:32 AM AEST
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very sad and emotional, can relate well,
pixie xx |
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