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Open Your Eyes
Contributed by
squeeks
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Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 07:18:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I turn my back to you once again.
I have always been there for you,
But it's not the same for you.
You're so caught up in your own head,
You don't even notice the others around you.
You criticize and hurt all things good to you.
Can't you see you're losing the things dearest to you?
Obviously not.
You need to open your eyes and see what you've become.
Copyright ©
squeeks
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2004-11-19 19:18:00]
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Re: Open Your Eyes
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 09:18:36 PM AEST
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| good write. some people cant see past denial. |
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Re: Open Your Eyes
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by kidpoet_213 on
Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 12:25:17 AM AEST
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WOW! Don't know who this is about... but very powerful... it sits up and rakes notice... excellent write!
~Donna~ |
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Re: Open Your Eyes
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by kidpoet_213 on
Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 12:31:04 AM AEST
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hey that last commet of mine the word "rakes" should have been "takes"
~Donna~ |
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