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DAY AND NIGHT
Contributed by
destinyfate
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Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 06:37:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Day by day, so far away.
Night by night, futher apart we lay.
Not enough time of each other did we see.
Left only with memories of you and me.
1-12-04
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destinyfate
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2004-11-19 18:37:23] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: DAY AND NIGHT
(User Rating: 1 ) by SWCSuzyQ on
Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 06:42:43 PM AEST (User
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good observation of some realationships
says alot in a short space. |
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Re: DAY AND NIGHT
(User Rating: 1 ) by jesusofholland on
Monday, 28th April 2008 @ 09:10:56 AM AEST (User
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Short but sweet. Rhythm was a bit off, but nice little poem, albeit a bit short. |
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