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captivate me
Contributed by
surge_joebot
on
Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 05:57:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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My tears swell in my eyes, turning my hands in my lap.
I try not to look at you... the very sight of you makes me sick!
My hand in my pocket... turning the blade
My hand on the knife...blade through your flesh
Your blood on my hands... Oh god what have I done
My blood on the knife...
It 's my fault.
We both die.
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Re: captivate me
(User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 12:24:32 AM AEST
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| quick pace and interesting. |
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Re: captivate me
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 24th August 2006 @ 10:10:58 PM AEST
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i love it! short and sweet, but yet so much packed into those few words. amazing...it's darkly beautiful and i love it
- Bethani - |
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Re: captivate me
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by lady-quiet-dreamer on
Sunday, 15th April 2007 @ 02:59:09 AM AEST
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| very well written and the emotion is very visible. thank you for a good read. |
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