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Your Solemn Place
Contributed by
whitetiger
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Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 03:18:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Deep under the currents of your twisted body
I can hear you singing down in my belly.
I can feel you in the icy foam of a swaying sea.
I can touch you in your solemn place.
I can snuggle up in your beating heart
Down in the thorny jungle of your lifeless world
I can hear you calling in my ear.
I can see you in my eyes.
I can feel your lungs breathing
Hold me close to you.
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whitetiger
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2004-11-19 15:18:36]
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Re: Your Solemn Place
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by mysticpoet on
Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 03:21:31 PM AEST
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That is beautiful, never are you so close,
so connected--wonderful feeling, isn't it? |
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Re: Your Solemn Place
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by fielding88 on
Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 02:03:49 PM AEST
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| The best part about this piece was the fact that u were so descriptive..something I know i cannot accomplish at this stage in my writing. I really enjoy descriptive poetry. Good job! |
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Re: Your Solemn Place
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 11:55:50 PM AEST
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| Romantic and not bad at all. Cheers! |
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