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Coveted Minutes
Contributed by
Red_October
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Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 01:32:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
dedicatedpoems
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so much weight on me
i feel my knees
buckle, halfway
and i struggle to stay
standing, i struggle to
stay around for coveted minutes
spent with my immaculate
and his desires
the weight of this universe
is solid, approaches unbearable at times
still the coveted minutes
will always be mine
will always be worthy of a lifetime
of fighting to keep them alive
and i do fight, a raging battle inside
of wrong and right
of black and white
of coveted minutes that are never at night
of loneliness that is not alright
and the void that is left unsatisfied
so much weight on me
feels priceless
as I straighten my knees
and struggle to stay standing
fighting as I bleed
for my immaculate
and the desires
fulfilled in coveted dreams
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Red_October
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2004-11-19 13:32:36] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Coveted Minutes
(User Rating: 1 ) by Kie on
Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 02:13:19 PM AEST (User
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I was so drawn to this poem. I have felt the weight you described so thoroughly in this poem. The title was excellent as well.
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Re: Coveted Minutes
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 02:20:20 PM AEST (User
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So beautifully written. Great write.
Take Care
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Re: Coveted Minutes
(User Rating: 1 ) by xMizeriex on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 06:22:38 AM AEST (User
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Powerful imagery.
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