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It Hurts To Breathe

Contributed by pixie on Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 10:08:20 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



It even hurts me to breathe,
I have begged, pleaded for it to leave,
But still it stays at hurts me more,
Slams my heart full in the door.

Why can’t I just get on & live,
My happiness has disappeared through the sieve,
Slipped right through my fingers,
Never thought to stop & linger.

I try to chase it but it’s too fast,
I must’ve been stupid to think it would last,
The harder that I seem to try,
The more tears that fall as I cry.

When I breathe in it hurts so much,
I long to feel a soft, loving touch,
All I feel now is alone & quite bare,
I really do feel like nobodies there.

No-one there to ease my troubles,
Everyone wants to burst my bubbles,
I wake up not feeling rested at all,
I feel I am insignificant & small.

I try to breathe in, it burns my chest,
Please heartache give it a rest,
I want to inhale & not feel this pain,
I want to feel truly alive again.







Copyright © pixie ... [ 2004-11-19 10:08:20]
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Re: It Hurts To Breathe (User Rating: 1 )
by little_genna on Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 10:31:47 AM AEST
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This is really sad but really well written,
I feel like parts of this poem describe,
feel like it right now, but thats another
story.
I really like this.

Take care of yourself hun
*hugs you*
Gen xx


Re: It Hurts To Breathe (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 11:54:20 AM AEST
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aww this is a sad write.. your inner pain will go away ... you just have to find the pieces that fit.. you write alot like I do hehe but thats cool.. I enjoy your poetry.. its so deep and moving.. you can always feel what you write and i like that alot..

the emptiness and inner pain will go away someday trust me .. it won't last forever..

Peace and hope

JENNI


Re: It Hurts To Breathe (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 01:00:29 PM AEST
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aaahhhh i know of this pain......but ya know....the problem is we are alive.....because we can feel.....you're not alone my friend....on your journey to the light.....




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