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come
Contributed by
amatt
on
Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 09:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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come into the fire
and darkness surrounds you
come into the light
and you will be blinded forever
come into the water
and drown in a pool of sorrows
come into the ground
and you will be buried with the dead
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amatt
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2004-11-19 09:45:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: come
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 11:54:16 PM AEST (User
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It's a good start to something, but it's not real clear what you're trying to say with this one. But keep writing. Cheers! |
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