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Not together again
Contributed by
elatednbliss
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Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 06:39:34 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I want to talk to you
for the first and last time
and please listen to what I got to say...
please don't cruse me out anymore
cuase I'm already on the edge
I'm holding on my my pinky
and I don't know why
why can't i let go
let go of life
and you
so I can be alone
together with loneliness again
oh how he was a good friend
I should of never left my solitude alone...
So here I sit
poisoned with you on my mind
and i try not to cry
Cuase you never cry for me
And how I hate
myself for loving you so much
Things would be so much better
if I could only get away...
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elatednbliss
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2004-11-19 06:39:34]
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Re: Not together again
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 09:48:57 AM AEST
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Wow! deep and powerful full of emotions.. I can really relate to how you are or were or still are feeling and i know how it is and how it goes. Hang in there.
blessed be
~ :: christina :: ~ |
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Re: Not together again
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 11:48:51 PM AEST
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It's a fairly good poem. It might be more effective if you spelled "cause" right though. Keep writing.
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Re: Not together again
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by emystar on
Thursday, 10th January 2008 @ 08:12:08 PM AEST
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Hey, this is incredile writing.
I know the thoughts, feelings-n-emotions.
Hang tuff as joy cometh in the morning.
Please take it easy on yourself.
Take care, huggs,
emy |
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