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Friends Turned More

Contributed by witch_derna on Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 05:37:28 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



A giant of a man was he
But felt unwanted, unloved
Searching for someone to love him
Looking anywhere for his beloved

He almost gave up
Almost quit the fight
He wrote his friend a letter
She got it in the night

It was his good-bye note
Said he was throwing the towel in
Her heart sank as she read it
Her friend, was he really gone?

Days went slowly by
Without a single word
If he quit, why can't I?
In her hand she held her blade

If he was gone, things didn't matter
She sat there planning her fate
When her friend appeared to her
"Stop this, I'm here, it's not to late!"

He tried to kill hisself he told her
But it didn't work
So happy inside was she
That God he didn't took

They talked so long that night
Each now "seeing" the other
So much joy did each bring
Realizing how much one needed the other

To show each other love
How it's suppose to be
They are so happily married now
For each other they finally did see





Copyright © witch_derna ... [ 2004-11-19 05:37:28]
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Re: Friends Turned More (User Rating: 1 )
by LEMMEN on Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 09:21:05 AM AEST
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I remember that day the day i sent my "DEATH NOTE" I just could'nt do it there was something holding me here even though we just ment. I felt that spark as if you might be the one. I know now you are the one and happiness can return to the heart. Thank you my love from the bottom of my heart.

~~LOVE DENNIS~~


Re: Friends Turned More (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 09:41:40 AM AEST
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Such a emotional write. I believe through just reading and understanding the poems you both write that you were meant to be with each other. Also you should never part. Take care.

Blessed be
~ :: christina :: ~




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