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Rose
Contributed by
loopylou
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Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 04:29:26 AM in AEST
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You held this rose so close to your heart
petal by petal this rose it fell apart
and the crison red that use to remind you of our love
has blackend your heart
in the rain the colour of the rose is running
and it puts blood on my hands
but you stay cold regardless
untill the last of the rose withers away in your hands
just ashes now
of a fire that burns in our hearts forever
just ashes now
ashes and embers
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2004-11-19 04:29:26]
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Re: Rose
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 04:56:31 AM AEST
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| awesome, i love it |
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Re: Rose
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 08:33:11 AM AEST
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| Beautiful write displaying feelings in vivid thoughts and vivid images, cool poem. |
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Re: Rose
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 09:33:32 AM AEST
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| Really vivid.. Great write.. I loved it |
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