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feeling the thoughts
Contributed by
Dragontear27
on
Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 12:16:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I wanna scream i wanna shout
I wanna get rid of this feeling and let it all out
it's buried deep inside nestled within my skin
get it out of me just rip it out of me help me let out this feeling of sin
it started off as just one thing
growing into more as it tears away
at my mind my soul my eyes as i cry
it won't go away this feeling of hate
it hurts so bad i have to compensate
for the things i've done to so many people
and it wont even matter how you look at it now
all it will do is bring you down
the hopelessness of this life is meaningless
so i don't even know why bother why i try to
redeem myself cause nothing i ever do
will change the things i've done in the past or present
and everything i've done has been pretty recent
so i must hide and get away from all this
creeping into the shadows and darkness
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2004-11-19 00:16:36]
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Re: feeling the thoughts
(User Rating: 1 )
by Rxqueen on
Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 12:20:30 AM AEST
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| I really liked this, I can relate. Good writing! |
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Re: feeling the thoughts
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by faith_my_eyes on
Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 10:10:01 PM AEST
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| I can relate to the feeling of being trapped within ourselves due to our iniquity. Well stated. |
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