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It's Not Sane
Contributed by
CodyJ
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Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 07:27:46 PM in AEST
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Morphine.
Dripping slowly,
it's a shame.
Numbness.
Coming quickly,
to ease the pain.
Water.
Not enough,
to douse the flame.
Hope.
Is not itself,
it's not the same.
Love.
Doesn't come easy,
quite dame.
Emptiness.
Is all that's left,
all that remains.
Copyright ©
CodyJ
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2004-11-18 19:27:46]
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Re: It's Not Sane
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by Rxqueen on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 08:14:05 PM AEST
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| I liked this, short but sweet. Gotto love the morphine drips... |
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Re: It's Not Sane
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by fielding88 on
Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 05:38:19 PM AEST
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| I was shocked by the rhyme scheme alone. That was really well done. While I haven't had the need for morphine myself, you were right in ur author's note, I'm glad I read this. |
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