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Chaos
Contributed by
Gigi_15
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Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 05:51:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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My father was murderd
4 years and 39 days ago
I don't know how I survived it
But it's getting tougher and tougher
I'm missing him more and more
Always when I hear the word dad
Or I see someone with theirs
I wonder how it would be
If he was still here with me
I can't remember
How it is to have a dad
Everything is fading away
His voice, his face his smell
I can't remember anything at all
It makes me wanna tear down everything
I want him so bad
Even for just a minute
Just to tell him how much I miss him
And to ask him
If I'm still his baby girl
Daddy R.I.P.
Copyright ©
Gigi_15
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2004-11-18 17:51:17]
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Re: Chaos
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by LEMMEN on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 06:31:56 PM AEST
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Such a sad write I feel the pain inside I know what it is to lose a loving parent. I'm sure he is watching over you and as long as you contiune to writ he will always be remembered in side of you "GREAT WRITE"
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Re: Chaos
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by justjonesy on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 06:39:16 PM AEST
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| Great emotion...keep writing...hope to see some more soon |
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Re: Chaos
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by Wachumiri on
Wednesday, 27th July 2005 @ 09:16:49 PM AEST
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Wow... it really makes me think of how I often take things for granted. Well written, well put.
Take care.
David |
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