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Melodies
Contributed by
wakegurl77
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Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 05:15:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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through the wall
he puts me to sleep
through the wall
with his sweet melodies
Bittersweet music
to my ears
i lie down to rest
without my fears
Melodies so sweet
as i drift to sleep
voice so smooth
i can not move
the music seems
to fade my fears
the music seems
to bridge our years
through the wall
silence keeps my sleep
through the wall
no more sweet melodies
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2004-11-18 17:15:39]
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Re: Melodies
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by bonita2689 on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 05:24:46 PM AEST
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how simplistic yet heavenly...wonderful
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Re: Melodies
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by FleurdeSang on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 08:12:21 PM AEST
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Sheer perfection, wakegurl77... More words when they fully form, and are suitable to post! Excellent write. 5/5
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