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Description
Contributed by
gimpie
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Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 05:03:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Sleepless nights that never end
Dreams that creep around every bend
Twists and turns I seem so weak
Whispers heard but dare not speak,
Eyes that pierce are dark as night
Try and fail, you just can't fight
Helpless love is where I stand
He holds me within his hands,
Little looks can melt my heart
Fix what once was torn apart
Arms that hold me safe and warm
Love is found in his one form.
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2004-11-18 17:03:08]
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Re: Description
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by recompile on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 05:30:28 PM AEST
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| A preaty kind of salvation. |
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Re: Description
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by fielding88 on
Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 12:13:05 PM AEST
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| I really like how you ended the poem. Even if it didnt seem like it at first, you brought everything together in the end, and thats the most important part (to me anyways). All in all, I enjoyed reading it. You described things really well. |
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