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Losing Myself
Contributed by
bonita2689
on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 04:51:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Empty faces greet you
and the days are un-inviting
your home is but a stranger
memories of yesterday are all you carry
everything has changed
and somehow your life has been misplaced
and you don't know where your going
the days become meaningless
and time becomes your enemy
that you forget to care
it's when you sleep waiting for death
and the world flies by
and you go un-noticed
and the things of the past become faint
you hide in your corner
to supress the sorrows
waiting to find hope
or let go of the little you had
so dreary and so pointless
sweet death you beckon
save me from living
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2004-11-18 16:51:09]
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Re: Losing Myself
(User Rating: 1 )
by ZiltzWiltz on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 04:53:26 PM AEST
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| wow. i love this poem. i think youve just expressed what im feeling right now better than i could...very good job. |
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Re: Losing Myself
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by Doriens_Picture on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 05:04:29 PM AEST
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| time is never a friend and i have forgoten my past i live for tomorow coz today will never last |
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