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Fear

Contributed by matt73 on Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 04:48:58 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

A rising man
gives his legs
to me

A breathing man
gives his lungs
to me

A fearless man
gives his courage
to me

A man inside, a man deprived
gives his remaining
to me

A man of wisdom
gives his mind
to me

A man of love
gives his heart
to me

A man outside, a man decides
to give his life
to me

"I tried, I gave, I lied, I betrayed
I regret, I dwell, I lived, I die
I'm sorry, forgive me, help me, take this life."

A man took me to his head
and let me breathe
A man dropped me to the floor
and looked at me...

"I made you fear, out of panic, out of thought
gave you that trigger, gave you that shot
I see now fear, no longer do you blind me
I break you fear, no longer are you piece of me"...

A man gave and a man took
he now knows he's worth a look
A man found, a man came to terms
A man gave me a chance
let me burn.

A man lives, A man stands
A man, a better man
gives me thanks.

Copyright © matt73 ... [ 2004-11-18 16:48:58]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Fear (User Rating: 1 )
by a_bear on Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 05:20:18 PM AEST
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again, you leave me weeping..you inspired my write today..thanks. It's No One There. It came to be because of you..it came fast, but hard. I hope you read it.
http://www.your-poetry.com/modules.php?name=News&file=article&sid=72096

that's the link to it if you're interested..I hope you will be.

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