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Famine
Contributed by
bonita2689
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Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 04:41:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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starving for answers
this bitter taste lingers
sick and suffocating
truth and fate mingle
the foul breath of hunger
seeps from within these pores
brazen and ravenous
satiate this savage
when pride collapses
weakness relapses
thirsting for life,eternally
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2004-11-18 16:41:44]
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Re: Famine
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by Doriens_Picture on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 05:05:42 PM AEST
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Re: Famine
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 07:48:00 AM AEST
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Good use of 'savage', along with 'pride', although i'm not sure how exactly weakness 'relapses', isn't this supposed to be the other way around?
At any rate, this is more potent than the others i've read by you.
Keep writing. |
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