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Death Screams
Contributed by
pixie
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Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 03:16:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Death forever screams into my ear,
I don’t want it to keep coming near,
I want to be finally freed from my pain,
From those feelings that drove me insane.
I cover my ears up so I can hear no more,
I have begun putting bolts on my door,
But they still bang & kick no matter what I do,
I just hope & pray that they never do get through.
I have tried to block these terrifying sounds,
Because no longer do I want them around
They have scarred my fragile mind,
Kept me held prisoner, kept me in a bind.
I once thought suicide was the only way out,
That was when nobody could hear my shouts,
I think now that my voice can be heard,
It now sounds like a little, baby bird.
It tries to drown out my voice with its screams,
It beat me for while as I had no-one on my team,
Now I can see a speckle of light,
I keep it in my dreams & hold onto it tight.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2004-11-18 15:16:42]
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Re: Death Screams
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by afterdark on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 04:06:28 PM AEST
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| Damn hun this is really kickin..I love it. |
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Re: Death Screams
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 04:21:21 PM AEST
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Hmn. I'm hoping that this is more than a little poetic license, pix, 'cos this sounds pretty scary to me.
"But they still bang & kick no matter what I do,"
Hoping your speckle shines someday like the sun, I am
N_F. |
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Re: Death Screams
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by Luinil on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 08:17:27 PM AEST
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| very emotional imagery-- stay strong, beautiful writing* |
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Re: Death Screams
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by venkat on
Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 01:18:18 AM AEST
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| How sad...its really disheartening..peace my dear girl..:-)venkat |
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Re: Death Screams
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by secretwind on
Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 01:18:29 AM AEST
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I can hear ya pixie,hang on,your time will come.
The Wind... |
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Re: Death Screams
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by givingin on
Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 08:51:54 AM AEST
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Awww, pixie,
this is such an emotinal right
I really enjoyed reading this,
it was so sad and powerful!
I lub you
ttyl
*~givingin~~~* |
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Re: Death Screams
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by jaeann on
Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 01:18:42 PM AEST
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| i love this one....title and all.....there's power to be gained from our stay in the darkness....rest and absorb and write....you have a gift...... |
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Re: Death Screams
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by xx_lil_devilish_angel_xx on
Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 10:56:57 AM AEST
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Very emotional and well written poem. The rhyme content is great. I feel for you and can relate to what you are saying*hugz*. If you ever need to talk just PM me.
Lots of Luv,
xx_lil_devlish_angel_xx
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx |
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