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Dangling
Contributed by
_Raspberry_
on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 02:18:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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In her sleep,
Fretfull dreams
While awake,
Silent screams
Open wide,
Her eyes plead
Hands bound,
No escape
Red lips closed,
Still they shake
Struggling,
Her will to break
Salty tears,
Drip from her chin
Warm red tounge,
Invites them in
Fingers wet,
Slippery Sin
Strategic cuts,
In loving places
She writhes in pain,
As he paces
Pleads compassion,
He has no patience
Her blue eyes,
Screaming, pleading
He only wants,
To see her bleeding
On her pain,
Insanity's feeding
His fingers touch,
Skin is coarse
In his eyes,
No remorse
She'll be his,
Even if by force
Dirty games,
Now she loses
She his whore,
When he chooses
Escaping thoughts,
Proving foolish...
Copyright ©
_Raspberry_
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2004-11-18 14:18:41]
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Re: Dangling
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by matts_sweetie_04 on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 02:27:03 PM AEST
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| This poem was dark and sad but a good write. Keep up the good work! |
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Re: Dangling
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by CrimsonTears on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 02:33:00 PM AEST
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this poem is dark and kinda twisted....but i loved it....awesome job
Lots of Love
CrimsonTears |
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Re: Dangling
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by a_bear on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 02:46:33 PM AEST
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| The poetic form is good..I can't comment on the subject it horrifies me (I just made a comment..lol) It was powerful..chilling. It's like a really good actor that can make you hate him.. |
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Re: Dangling
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by pixie on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 03:23:42 PM AEST
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wow that was so well written, dark and deep, I love this one,
pixie xx |
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Re: Dangling
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by whisper-on-the-wind on
Monday, 7th March 2011 @ 11:08:55 AM AEST
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| dark indeed, makes you feel for the victim.. |
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