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Killers of Their Own Kind
Contributed by
pyrofungus
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Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 11:23:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Ashes fall to the ground
As people begin to burn
Devastating lies foretold
By the innocence unheard of
Laughing in the face of our brutal enemy
He grins as blood
Gains its power over man
Making what’s left of the human race
Killers of their own kind
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2004-11-18 11:23:15]
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Re: Killers of Their Own Kind
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by pixie on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 11:24:30 AM AEST
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ohh a very good dark write, well written,
pixie xx |
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Re: Killers of Their Own Kind
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 02:00:47 PM AEST
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| nice and short shows how sad this world is everyone is going around killing each other. |
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Re: Killers of Their Own Kind
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 04:40:12 PM AEST
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| it almost has a cannabalistic feel to it, towards the end. i liked this poem, although depressing, at least it was true. It has been said that man has reached his peak, isn't that pathetic, this is our peak!!!!!!!! well if that's true there is only one place to go, down, if it's bad now imagine how much worse it will be!!!!!! thanks for the write and the thoughts. |
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Re: Killers of Their Own Kind
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by Karls on
Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 11:39:01 AM AEST
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| I enjoyed this poem a lot. I'm a firm believer that one poem can change the world. I may be wrong, but I think that is what you are trying to do with this poem. You capture the inhumanity of the human race so well. It actually reminded me of our beloved President George W. Maybe you should send it to him! It might do us all some good...Keep up the great work. You are extremely talented! |
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