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MONSOON RAIN
Contributed by
docpardue
on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 10:37:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
war
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Monsoon rain with heavy downpour
Cleansing the earth
Refreshing and renewing soldiers
During break in patrolling
I take out a bar of soap
Strip off clothes and take a shower
In front of God and everyone
This is much better than some leech invested stream
How come the blood won't come off?
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2004-11-18 10:37:09]
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Re: MONSOON RAIN
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 04:03:28 PM AEST
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My guess is that you are/were bleeding, or this is somehow psychadelic/psychological.
Interesting poem, Doc. |
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Re: MONSOON RAIN
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by freckle on
Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 12:50:21 PM AEST
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| My guess is the blood is like a Macbeth moment. "Out damn spot, out!" Good poem. |
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Re: MONSOON RAIN
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by xMizeriex on
Monday, 31st January 2005 @ 11:07:17 AM AEST
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Awesome poem. Good job ^_^
Bx |
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