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noone
Contributed by
tigger
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Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 10:25:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I reach in the dark
noone'sthere
Icry out for love
noone cares
can you hold on
to something thats not there
hope fading
hearts unaware
pawn of life
moved and used at will
up and thrown away
used,abused
noones really there
noone really cares
Copyright ©
tigger
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2004-11-18 10:25:41]
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Re: noone
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by pixie on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 10:28:33 AM AEST
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emotional write, very sad, *hugs*
pixie xx |
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Re: noone
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by Kitty_cat on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 10:31:25 AM AEST
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I love your style, amazing write. I hope things will get better for you.
Thank you for writing this
cat xxx |
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Re: noone
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by _Raspberry_ on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 10:39:30 AM AEST
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| I think we've all been there at one time or another. Good write, you expressed yourself completely. |
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Re: noone
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by Stitch on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 10:53:14 AM AEST
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Yeah, that's how it feels.
You need to work on your spelling and punctuation a little, but this is an excellent start.
Stitch |
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Re: noone
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by arden on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 11:13:13 AM AEST
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emotiol wirte.
i agree with stitch that you need to work on your spelling and such just a tab bit.
but this was truely an awesome write.
well done, hope you post more soon :)
Arden |
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