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They Left
Contributed by
LayDownPlayDead
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Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 11:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Everything that was good and everything that once brightened my days is now completely gone. Little is left anymore, few still stand where they once did by my side and it’s all my fault. I gave up on what was there and what was true. I lost trust so everything fell apart as they so often do. I lost trust in my life, in my friends, in my family, in everything. I wish I could stand up and fight but I’m far too weak, no matter what I do I will always fall back down. I always feel like I’m in this huge hole, and nothing matters. People try to grab my hand and pull me up but they always seem to let go. Letting go is so easy….I wish I could just let go of everything, be free and happy but happiness is just a fading memory, as is much else now.
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Re: They Left
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by HumGirl18 on
Friday, 22nd November 2002 @ 01:32:04 AM AEST
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| I think a lot of people will be able to relate to this. I know I'm one... It's so true, it hurts to hear other people feel this way. Hopefully things will change, for you and I both. |
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Re: They Left
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by Rakerman1999 on
Friday, 22nd November 2002 @ 08:46:05 AM AEST
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| That is so sad...but I know this feeling exactly and you have put it into words perfectly. Great write !! :o) Larry |
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Re: They Left
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by PerfectlyDead666 on
Monday, 10th February 2003 @ 09:41:59 PM AEST
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| i like it very much |
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