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The Lonely Room In Which We Live In
Contributed by
Kreeping_Beauty
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Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 05:52:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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You will never hear me speeking into your ear
Though I am right next to you
I want to silent the room
But theres only you and me
Do you even observe me
Krying krimson into the palm of your hands
The obstruktion between us hurts
Stopping my whispering heart
I want you to hear me
I want you to love me…
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2004-11-18 05:52:35]
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Re: The Lonely Room In Which We Live In
(User Rating: 1 )
by Row on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 06:02:36 AM AEST
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| i understand your point, people are annoying ey |
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Re: The Lonely Room In Which We Live In
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 06:31:55 AM AEST
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| Other than the spelling errors I found this to be a beautiful poem, very sad and tender. |
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Re: The Lonely Room In Which We Live In
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by pixie on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 09:51:07 AM AEST
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deep and emotional,
pixie xx |
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