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late night phone call
Contributed by
brokenwings
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Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 03:40:23 AM in AEST
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hey baby its me i know it 3 in the mornign
i just needed to hear your voice,
dont' get mad, i know i call every night, just to see what your doing
but in our times i have no choice.
hey baby tell me something sweet,
yes i remember the place where we used to meet.
i know you missed those days, seem so long ago,
yes baby i missed those days too.
goodnight baby I'm sorry that I woke you,
no baby its alright,
i know i wish you could hold me tight.
yes baby I love you.
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brokenwings
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2004-11-18 03:40:23]
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Re: late night phone call
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 03:58:37 AM AEST
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| So beautifully sweet..felt the tenderness in your words..and the feelings of true love conveyed from the overall flow, awesome poem. |
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Re: late night phone call
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by blowfish_jane on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 04:21:26 AM AEST
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Aww that was really sweet, i know the feeling when you miss someone special.
Hugs,
Jane |
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Re: late night phone call
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by lostinmyself on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 04:35:36 AM AEST
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Awww, it was so sweet.
I really like this, the simplicity sort of shows how much you love them.
It's like...you almost don't need words. Am I right?
A lovely poem, I don't think it stinks at all.
*hugs*
Phil xxx |
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Re: late night phone call
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by Trisha on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 08:34:22 PM AEST
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Wow this is really good I love this and I am going to copy it and use it as my background on my computer thanks
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