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A Need To See Red
Contributed by
witch_derna
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Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 01:20:14 AM in AEST
Topic:
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The anger and rage boils within
Feeling my temper rise again
Is there no stop to this
Is there true happiness?
Questions I ask my daily
Not understanding this self hatred
Never feeling worthy
Of anything good
Feeling a need for self-punishment
And a need to see blood
All I feel is judgement
All I am is mis-understood
Don't know where I'll cut this time
Cause everytime I'm found out
I just need to feel ease, peace of mind
And no, death is not what this is about.
Not this time :(
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Re: A Need To See Red
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by SocialMisfit on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 01:32:14 AM AEST
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hmmm very dark very much how i have felt at some times, but back to the poem it has good flow and good ryme gj
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Re: A Need To See Red
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 03:16:20 AM AEST
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Raw feelings drip from your well chosen words..anger sadness they are all here...within in ink..and soon to be in blood.
A beautiful write showing strength and depth. |
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Re: A Need To See Red
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 05:04:48 PM AEST
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a shiver worthy poem indeed. I felt the pain
that seeped through every line. I wish I could
say I couldn't relate but I can. I hope that you
have only written on paper instead of "writing"
on your skin. A wonderful poem.
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Re: A Need To See Red
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by LEMMEN on
Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 09:13:17 AM AEST
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Is there true happiness? YES you have filled my heart beyound true happiness. All I feel is judgement. Let no one judge lest they be judged. I can not judge for I am of the same. All I am is mis-understood. We all are unless we find the speical someone that truly understands us and our ways. I just wish you would let me see this inner pain this force that drives you to cut this way. Have faith my love I shall forever be here by your side in good and bad. As a friend as a lover as someone that truly understands that bleeding is not just a game.
~~LOVE DENNIS~~
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