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TO YOU MY FRIEND
Contributed by
witch_derna
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Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 01:12:16 AM in AEST
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Once again sitting with my friend
Telling him the day I've had
He knows all my pain
Only he can understand
"You know how to solve this,
just pick me up
hold me in your hand", he said
Holding him tightly
Letting him in a little at a time
My mouth starts to burn with his taste
He's all over me now
I'm spilling all over him
My skin burns from his touch
Falling back on my bed
Feeling some better now
All the days pains released
Atleast enough to sleep
Thank you once again my friend
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witch_derna
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2004-11-18 01:12:16]
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Re: TO YOU MY FRIEND
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by a_bear on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 02:03:45 AM AEST
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| well, I can't say I understood it..I'm very naive..but I gave it a read and commented..just think of that! lol. |
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Re: TO YOU MY FRIEND
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 04:08:36 AM AEST
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| A blade to many of us can be called a friend or a curse..guess it comes down to what aspect of our lives causes us to sink into feeling the worst...still a cool poem..well composed. |
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Re: TO YOU MY FRIEND
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by pixie on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 09:55:42 AM AEST
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deep and sad, i was once friends with a blade, I am still trying to break my ties with it forever *hugs*
pixie xx |
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Re: TO YOU MY FRIEND
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by LEMMEN on
Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 09:03:57 AM AEST
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I wish this friend of yours would go away. all he causes is hurt and pain. let me show you the way. Let me help you with this inner pain.
I know the feelings he gives you i still do it to. But now we have each other. And together theres nothing we can't overcome.
~LOVE DENNIS~ |
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