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Untitled (Shadow)
Contributed by
babs
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Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 12:42:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I am alive, yet I do not live
I walk with the living cloaked in darkness
Distorted
I stretch out before you
I am faceless
No mouth, no nose, no eyes
I mimic the actions of those who live
But I have not found life
I am alive, yet I do not live
I travel silently
Distanced from the world
I do not know of life's joys
Love, passion
I know only of the dreary darkness in which I dwell
Do not dismiss me, nor scorn me
I am merely a dimmed reflection of you
I am alive, yet I do not live
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babs
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2004-11-18 00:42:37]
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Re: Untitled (Shadow)
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by witch_derna on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 01:29:19 AM AEST
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I think we all feel like a shadow from time to time. Great work.
Blessed Be.
MaDonna |
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Re: Untitled (Shadow)
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 06:39:25 AM AEST
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| Awesome poem, Have this way many a time, and you have captured the true essence on how many feel sometime in their lives, cool poem. |
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