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Along Came These Tears
Contributed by
tasteof_ink
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Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 11:39:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
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No matter how I look at the situation.
It just leaves me sore.
All this pain and burning.
Can't take much more.
I don't understand why i'm disolving.
While i'm lying on the floor.
You're stuck in my head,in my throat.
Beating me like a fool that i am.
i'm sorry i'm not perfect.
i'm nothing to you.
i'm sorry i can be anything true.
if i could turn back time i'd never be born.
then in your sides,there would be no thorns.
i cry to you to stop just for the time being.
but i geuss you enjoy these unnecesary beatings.
if it makes you happy,that's all that i care.
and know that for your anger,i will always be there.
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Re: Along Came These Tears
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by a_bear on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 11:49:52 PM AEST
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| awww...better to get attention for anger than no attention at all?..that sucks big time..Nice that you can let it out in your writing.. thanks for sharing..:-*) |
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Re: Along Came These Tears
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by TheRaven on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 12:00:27 AM AEST
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i can feel your bittersweet pain through your awesome writing. could be from a parent or significant other, huh? *hug* hang in there and keep up the good writes.
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Re: Along Came These Tears
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by witch_derna on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 01:32:48 AM AEST
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Ive been there. It was the kind of attention he knew how to give. Hope all will be better for you soon.
Brightest of Blessings to you.
MaDonna |
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Re: Along Came These Tears
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 06:42:21 AM AEST
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| I know the feeling in which you describe, though I have felt the pain and the burn of the lash...I think I prefered to be ignored than feel that anymore, cool poem very visual and sad. |
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