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Nothing New
Contributed by
dirtyfool
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Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 11:00:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I'll take this as goodbye,
There is no reason to cry,
Yet another broken heart,
Yet another life torn apart,
It's nothing new,
But I hoped it would be different with you,
Disappointment fills me once again,
My life was happy way back when,
Until love shattered it all,
This will be the last time I fall,
For someone Like you,
There is nothing left to do,
Nothing last forever,
So don't promise what can never be,
I know you never truly loved me,
I'll be fine on my own,
I'd rather be alone
Copyright ©
dirtyfool
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2004-11-17 23:00:27]
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Re: Nothing New
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by kaytie on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 11:07:28 PM AEST
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| wow..well done : ) |
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Re: Nothing New
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by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 11:54:18 PM AEST
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such a sad poem. When we lose someone
we love (or think we love) the only thing we
can do is move on. There is no sense in
waiting around for someone that hurts us.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Nothing New
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by a_bear on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 02:07:58 AM AEST
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nothing lasts forever... you said nothing last
now that I've done the critique bit.. well you asked for it will all your begging..and I always beg and no one reads me and that goes for you too.. begging never got me anywhere..lol. |
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Re: Nothing New
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 07:00:46 AM AEST
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| Very sad poem, losing someone is hard to deal with whether in a relationship or worse, they are one in the same..always leaving its mark with the mind heart and soul, cool poem, awesome flow and ryme. |
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Re: Nothing New
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by lostinmyself on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 08:38:48 AM AEST
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I can relate alot to this.
But...I'm not sure if you'll be better off alone... we all say that I think, and then we realize we need people.
I hope you find peace soon.
Sad write,
*hugs*
Phil xxx |
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