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For You I'll Take This Pain
Contributed by
dirtyfool
on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 10:54:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Go ahead,
Say those 3 words,
Don't be afraid,
You can just rip my heart out now,
No reason to wait,
Just don't break my heart to late,
Do it when I'm thinking,
Everything is good,
Remind me that I'm not misunderstood,
You really said the words,
I don't Love you anymore,
Remind me of the day,
You walked out the door,
I'll relive the tears,
The pain,
The sorrow,
If I could just see you again tomorrow,
And hold you close one last time
It would be worth it all,
Even the tears continue to fall
Copyright ©
dirtyfool
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2004-11-17 22:54:38]
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Re: For You I'll Take This Pain
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by tasteof_ink on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 11:28:55 PM AEST
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I like it. Nicely Written. Good Job. I had to make a new accnt. Come read my poem(s),if you'd like,and comment honestly if you do.
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Re: For You I'll Take This Pain
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by TheRaven on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 11:54:21 PM AEST
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nice flow. great job setting up the mood, i know what this feels like. good write keep it up
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Re: For You I'll Take This Pain
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by brokenwings on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 03:45:44 AM AEST
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| very good job.. think we've all been there before... |
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Re: For You I'll Take This Pain
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 07:03:05 AM AEST
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| Beautifully written capturing the essence of the poem..and releasing it in an outburst or flood of passionate feelings...coated in sorrow. |
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