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Demon shadow
Contributed by
Dragontear27
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Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 10:01:30 PM in AEST
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I see the demon in your shadow
consuming you heart making it hollow
evil sinking into your pores
opening up unlocked doors
the hate is taking over you can't escape it now
you wanna run away but don't know how
the evil's catching up to you
so what in the hell will you do
malice fills you up inside
and everthing you knew slowly dies
the demon's taking over your soul
and slowly you mind loses control
the hate is taking over you can't escape it now
you wanna run away but don't know how
the evil's catching up to you
so what in the hell will you do
god won't help you now your posessed
darkness and hate is what you've been blessed
you will never be redeamed
and you can never wake up from this dream
the hate is taking over you can't escape it now
you wanna run away but don't know how
the evil's catching up to you
so what in the hell will you do
just shut your eyes and welcome it in
it will be over soon its getting close to the end
you will never get to see the light
just give up and end the fight
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2004-11-17 22:01:30]
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Re: Demon shadow
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by tasteof_ink on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 11:44:28 PM AEST
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I like it. I didn't laugh at all. Nicely written. Read and comment my poems if you'd like. Good Job on your first song.
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Re: Demon shadow
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by lostinmyself on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 08:55:45 AM AEST
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Wy would anyone laugh. It's good.
Especially as a first time.
There are a few mistakes, but it's all good.
Great write,
*hugs*
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