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my dark coy mistress
Contributed by
elatednbliss
on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 09:37:48 PM in AEST
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toughstuff
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Love is
a dark
twisted
mistress
it's a
knife
covered
with sweet
words and
kisses
stabbing you
in the back
of the heart
turning it's blade
tearing you
apart...
Love's a wolf
and I'm the lamb
Love is nothing
but a choking hand
Love is a snake
with puppy dog eyes
Love is truely
a deadly surprise...
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elatednbliss
... [
2004-11-17 21:37:48]
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Re: my dark coy mistress
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by ThePumpkinKing on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 09:39:43 PM AEST
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such a true poem...i love it.
I love a good metaphor and you had quite a few =), excellent writing here
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Re: my dark coy mistress
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by Lessa on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 10:51:24 PM AEST
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a very dark look at love, sad, i guess its tru when you havent found the right one, keep your head up, when your tru love finds you love is the lamb and you are the keeper.
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