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kiss the blade
Contributed by
elatednbliss
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Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 09:20:49 PM in AEST
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There is something
under my bed
and I hear it breathing
When I lay my head
somethings lurking under my sheets
sending chills down my spine and it
gives me the creeps
But why should I care
since I put it there
And I'll hopefully use it
One day if I dare
So I should stop all this crying
and all of these tears
and be brave about it
then end all my fears
of being alone cauase I don't deserve to be...
those are my last thoughts
as I push this knife in me...
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2004-11-17 21:20:49]
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Re: kiss the blade
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by Dragontear27 on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 10:08:09 PM AEST
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| nice poem pain comes to everyone not just a single entity im sure you know that, but of course why wouldn't you? Lol anyways great poem keep it up. |
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Re: kiss the blade
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 12:06:39 AM AEST
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very haunting and well written. I hope you use
your talents in writing instead of giving in to
the temptation that many before have
pondered.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: kiss the blade
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by givingin on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 07:34:48 AM AEST
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very good
I really enjoyed reading this.
I hope you don't give in.
like me...
*~givingin~* |
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Re: kiss the blade
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by bethers_is_my_baby on
Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 07:47:01 PM AEST
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| hey, its a good poem:) i feel your pain:( hang in there! |
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Re: kiss the blade
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by seci on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 09:51:19 PM AEST
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| you are a very good writer. the poem is really good as well.hopefully you do not give in,but other then that , you are a excellent writerorshould i say poet. |
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