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Bleeding
Contributed by
gothchyk
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Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 09:05:36 PM in AEST
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Stars are shining bright
whlie she bleeds for someone she loves
She's dying but does not feel it
Growing cold in the darkness
Not thinking about whats to come
The numbness is taking over
Numbness she wishes she felt earlier
The pain in her life is finally leaving her
She is almost free
but what does she do?
Where does she go?
No one knows cause she 's already gone
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2004-11-17 21:05:36]
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Re: Bleeding
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 07:07:06 AM AEST
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Dont know why no one has commented on this poem, I liked it from beginning to the end...saw the pictures painted by your words...and the feelings dwelling deep within the whole...beautifully written...lol with only one spelling error...which isnt bad my poems usually get edited half a dozen times before I post and yet errors still creep through.
cool write, enjoyed reading a poem from such a talented mind. |
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Re: Bleeding
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by givingin on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 07:45:59 AM AEST
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I loved this poem.
It was so sad,
I really enjoyed it!
*~givingin~* |
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Re: Bleeding
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by LEMMEN on
Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 10:21:45 AM AEST
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I have to agree with the other two comments. This is a very good write. Full of emotion. I can feel the sadness the lonelyness.
~~DENNIS~~ |
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Re: Bleeding
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by Strawberry_Stitch on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 06:27:19 AM AEST
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| its like you describe how im feeling right now . Great write |
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Re: Bleeding
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by Doriens_Picture on
Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 11:15:48 PM AEST
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I too wish i were numb all the time
great write |
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Re: Bleeding
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by Shattered_soul on
Friday, 11th November 2005 @ 03:47:37 PM AEST
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If only.
~S.S |
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Re: Bleeding
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by Crim on
Tuesday, 21st February 2006 @ 07:37:45 PM AEST
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| Enjoyed the poem. Sudden ending gave it a great effect. Great job. |
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