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Tearing
Contributed by
foxxylady852
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Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 08:57:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Tearing away at this old flesh
Bleeding new skin underlying
Isint it good to know you're still alive
When all your life you've felt like dying?
Scratching at old memories
Dust the footprints you left behind
Erase the pages in your book
You filled with thoughts you had in mind
Smile like nothing happened,
you forget all that ever was
The blood stains go away with time
Just like everything else does
Yesterday was hell
Today was just alright
Tomorrow will be better
And I'll sleep well tonight.
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foxxylady852
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2004-11-17 20:57:34]
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Re: Tearing
(User Rating: 1 )
by ThePumpkinKing on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 09:16:33 PM AEST
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oh wow, I could totally relate to this! I really like the last stanza :
"Yesterday was hell
Today was just alright
Tomorrow will be better
And I'll sleep well tonight."
It leaves that since of hope that we all have to have that tomorrow will be better then the previous days and today
great job on this poem, I enjoyed it a lot
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Re: Tearing
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by nightrider on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 09:37:10 PM AEST
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shockingly refreshing, if you will.
well put, well described... felt like my thoughts written down in a much more elequoent way than i can.
cheers.
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Re: Tearing
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by Stonedraider23 on
Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 09:23:36 PM AEST
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| good write i never want tomorrow to come so i alawys stay up all nite cuz i dont want to start again |
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