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Last Breath

Contributed by LayDownPlayDead on Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 10:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



I’m anticipating that one last breath that will release me from all my problems. That one breath that will finally make me happy. That release is all I’m looking for. Why can’t I just take that one last breath? Why won’t the world let me be happy? Why do I have to continue to suffer alone? When will the world release me from this? All I can do is just sit in my room all alone and watch the blood flow out so beautifully, for the blood is the only release that I have from the world that I so regretfully know. The red lines the razor leaves behind is a constant reminder of how ***** up I really am. I can’t help but look at the gashes and think of how great death seems. How death would just make everything go away. Where will my road end? When will they get to put me in the ground? How soon will it be? WHEN?




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Re: Last Breath (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 11:31:39 PM AEST
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I feel for you & wish I could give you a hug!
So many of you on here want to take your life!
I was there once too,let me tell you it wasnt pretty,I know this pain,but my life got better & so will yours one day maybe not now but it will! God bless! Christina


Re: Last Breath (User Rating: 1 )
by frozensuicide on Monday, 2nd December 2002 @ 09:31:01 PM AEST
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hey this is really good! feels like something ive gone through. stay strong!
hug a moose!


Re: Last Breath (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 4th December 2002 @ 10:02:09 PM AEST
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Marc: I know how you feel Autumn, I really do, but this too shall pass. I wish that you didn't have to feel that way, but wishing doesn't do any good. Maybe some day soon, you won't have to feel this way. I don't know why you harbor such feelings, but I truly hope that you will be able to enjoy life someday. If you ever need anyone to talk to, I'm here for you. I know a lot of people must say that, but I am only someone online and can't hurt you or tell people about anything you say to me because I don't know the people you associate yourself with.




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